Quit you

I can feel it

the darkness

its like a cool cloth

pressed against my

burning forehead

and all the light

that hurts my eyes

is fading

and I don’t have this

pain lodged deep


it’s been swallowed whole

by the nothingness

and every care that ever was

has died and gone away


there is only me

and I’m worth more

than bleeding

and pleading

and begging

I deserve more

than silence

and excuses

and broken hearts

in the end

its dark in here

and cold

and numbing

and I still have me

no more room for you

no more time for

aches and pains

and lies


where was I going with this?

I let it go

no cares

no hopes

only blessed nothing

surrounding me.


Author: doing2016

I started writing when I was very young. Then I was mortified on a bus full of people when one of my stories was read aloud. I lost my focus and quit. Now, I'm trying to find my voice and my ambition. I love to write, good or bad. So, I'm doing it here and now. Thank you.

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